After reviewing the feedback on your argument essay, identify one thing you did well and one area you need to improve. Explain what you will do differently the next time you write an AP Lang argument essay.

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    Prompt: After reviewing the feedback on your argument essay, identify one thing you did well and one area you need to improve. Explain what you will do differently the next time you write an AP Lang argument essay.

    Prompt Response: One thing I did well based off the feedback was one of my pieces of evidence. My best piece of evidence was about my six week documentation of my physical therapy trips. What I need to work on is my sophistication and my conclusion paragraph. What I would do differently is my planning. I will also try to explain more in depth and connect that back to my thesis.

    Summary: Today we talked about our essays and writing our own poems.

    Reflection: I learned about my improvements and what I could work on. This feedback can help me on the AP test. 

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